Thursday, 30 July 2015

Cross Country

Today I did awesome on the cross country track because I am beating all of my times every time I do it, so my very first one was 20:21, my second one was 19:22, my third one was 18:30 and today's one was 18:06. So those times that I did were great and I am really looking forward to the next one, not.  

Monday, 27 July 2015

WALT: Re-craft our Writing



WALT: Re-craft our writing
  • Specific vocabulary
  • Incorporate language features
  • Add or delete information


I can feel the freezing cold wind blowing into my face, I can feel butterflies flying in my stomach saying I'm so nervous and really scared. The other competitors are all looking around, waiting to start the very exhausting race. The wet, cold and really disgusting mud was everywhere. It felt like I was going to faint. I am really worried about how long It going take to finish the race. Is everyone going to pass me? I heard the starter buzzer go, I started to sprint.


The changes I made were to use nouns so people will think I used brainstorming words in my writing, and to us some simile to really share all the ideas in this writing as well.



Thursday, 23 July 2015

Cross Country

It is the second time in the cross country race, last time I got 20:21 and this time I got 19:22. Witch means that I improved myself a bit more today, and I am hoping I will do the same next time as well. 

Tuesday, 21 July 2015

Actively Learn

On the day we did our Actively Learn we had to post our last answer on our blog and this is what I wrote. 
I think they are saying like ''come here baby I will keep you dry" or something like that.


My Reflection Week 1


Wednesday, 1 July 2015

Acids and Bases

In science tech we have been investigating acids and bases. We each tested 6 household substances with universal indicator paper to see what their pH numbers are. Numbers 1-6 were acids 7 is neutral eg water and 8-14 are bases.